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#1

Hi there,
My name is Joachim Skovgaard and I’ve decided to start some gameplays of the game, so i thought I just wanted to share it with you guys. As I’m still new in the gameplay world so any feedback would be lovely :smile:

Best Regards,
Joachim Skovgaard

#2

Right so here is what I think you have to work on:

  1. it is hard to understand what are you saying, you should try a different mic + talk slowly.
  2. when you do something, say why are you doing it and no what are you doing, for example when you make a 2D action game, dont just say “this will be a 2D action game”, explain why you choose it to be so, or add some color to it, so for excample you are making a 2D action fantasy game, say something like “right so this is going to be a small action game based on 2D graphics, we still dont have 3D so this will do for now, and it will be fatasy because fatasy and action are going well together”.
  3. when there is a popup window, read it out loud, dont just skip it

hope that helps :smiley:

#3

Hi OptiSTR,
Thanks for the feedback, I’ll remember that till next time :smile:
Still have to get used to the non-tutorial thing, you know, I have to learn how to talk “with” people instead of telling them what to do.

But it sure helped, and would love more feedback :smile:

#4

I made an episode 2, but recorded right after the first one, so haven’t really changed my style. Hopefully I’ll have the third up sometime today or tommorrow.

#5

Know what you’re going to say and say it as if we was sitting next to you in the room (too much “errrrrrr” and when you do speak, its like you’re talking to yourself - like when someone leaves an answerphone message and feels awkward as they know theres no-one actually there at the time, to speak with)