Can you give me Feedback on my new Outro?

Jediwolf · February 23, 2015, 5:41pm

Well I made a little outro, can you give me some feedback?

Haxor · February 23, 2015, 7:17pm

y shall I click de freddy to subscribe?

Jediwolf · February 23, 2015, 7:20pm

That’s just part of my outro bruh. Should I change it to something else?

chizbejoe · February 23, 2015, 7:54pm

The contrast isn’t very good (e.g. A really dark Freddy with a really light background). Try using more fitting combinations of colors and shades.

Also, having half of the text be on a white area of the background and the other half on blue area of the background is another thing which should be avoided. Try keeping your text consistent and easy to read.

Not trying to be picky, just trying to help.

Erling_Kristian · February 23, 2015, 10:04pm

I saw the outro 3 times. I didn’t notice the twitter icon before the third time i watched it. I would also recommend using a moving video instead of a picture. The length of the outro was good though.

Jediwolf · February 24, 2015, 12:16am

I can’t make a moving video; that’s only in paid programs. Unless you know a free program that does that, I can’t. Thanks for the input though!

chizbejoe · February 24, 2015, 2:23am

Try to find someone who can make one for you. Though, you probably won’t find any quality people to make one for you for free. Here’s an example of a (in my mind) perfect outro.

Why I consider this outro to be “perfect”:

Good contrast and color selection.
Simple yet high quality/resoloution graphics.
Not too flashy/vibrant.
Great layout.
Noticeable but not distracting social media and subscribe buttons.
Links to other videos.
Links to other videos take up most of the screen. This is good, because this is the thing viewers will care about the most (when it comes to an outro). It also shows that videos/entertainment is the priority, not just getting a sub or follower.
Simple and catchy music. Not too loud.

Now he’s a long-time and very popular youtuber, so yours doesn’t have to be as quality as that. But that’s just something to strive towards.

Haxor · February 24, 2015, 2:42pm

Yes!
Best outro ever!
I agree

I gotta say that the length is good either.

Jediwolf · February 24, 2015, 5:01pm

*too

Haxor · February 24, 2015, 5:30pm

no
it’s boo
like
booooooooo!

Sorry

Jediwolf · February 24, 2015, 7:05pm

You’re just some other users alternate. Stop it.

Haxor · February 25, 2015, 6:28am

hmm
Isn’t this yours alt?

Jediwolf · February 25, 2015, 3:13pm

bro my alt is pie

Haxor · February 25, 2015, 3:33pm

But you are addicted to Gabe, this can be your second one…

Jediwolf · February 25, 2015, 3:52pm

bro it isn’t me…
plus @Charlie said if I made another alt I would get banned… I cannot live without this forum

Charlie · February 25, 2015, 5:17pm

It was @Today sock puppet account.

Haxor · February 25, 2015, 5:51pm

How do you know ?

Charlie · February 25, 2015, 6:03pm

Because I am awesome

Stian · February 25, 2015, 8:22pm

If awesome means having access to the IP logs…

Charlie · February 25, 2015, 8:24pm

Smarty pants